Tuck shop writing

This is a part of my Tuck shop persuasive writing, I chose this paragraph because this is the one paragraph I put a lot of detail in. Also my teacher liked this paragraph, This is also my closing statement

I am Poem From Kiwi can

I am faithful and Encouraging

I wonder what the world would be like in the future

I see pupils learning at their best

I want to go back to Maku’e

I hear people discussing their ideas

I am Faithful and Encouraging

I pretend to be a singer during school

I feel happy and truthful

I touch the keyboard of my netbook

I worry when my family goes to hospital

I cry when I attend a tangi

I am Faithful and Encouraging

I understand the meaning of life

I say “ Don't give up on something you want to achieve”

I dream to go far in my life

I try being respectful to others

I hope that nothing will happen to my family

I wait until I am needed

I am Faithful and Encouraging

I did this poem at kiwi can, I was selected to say my poem in front of the class, I was nervous and all but I did it also they recorded me.

My Imaginative writing

This is my best paragraph that I did in this story because it has similes also it has personification. I learnt how to organise my structures in writing, also how to not add to much personification in just one paragraph.

My Ancestor poem

This is my Ancestor poem this will show you where I am from also what my family do and who they are, This only tells you a little bit about me.